Camillo's Reviews

[Bra Bashing]

i

love all the hateful reviews... that just insult you and tell you categorically never to make any cartoons EVER again. What a bunch of pious cunts newgrounders are.

but... as for the movie i thought it was good. I thought, it had about as much substance as any of the other instalments of this series... i mean, tits and ass vs beatnik poetry vs ubiquitous gothic angst vs irate squirrels. It’s much of a muchness and all fairly funny.

Stick a shower scene in the next one and I’ll vote 5 :D

har...

... i still vote 5

[Self-Portrait]

i

liked it

i also like the review where somebody points out...

"that picture that was made wuldnt even luk like dat it'd just be blood splatterd and a bullet hole in da middle"

JESUS! really? no... surely... i mean... it wouldn't? are you sure? maybe you should go test it out

[Boy Machine]

swearing

i'm fine with swearing. but when i'm able to predict every single "fuck" in the script, it's a bit stupid, "fuck this fuck that" my only advice would be to tone it down, not because it's offensive... just because it makes me cringe that your over using it. otherwise really good.

[Halo Scene Editor]

basic.

What is the merit in something like this? unless you made the sprites yourself. it's just an assemblage of a few of the most basic functions of flash, and a collection sprites. As a learning exercise that would never see the light of day it is okay.

I’d say ways to improve this, would be.

To improve the interface significantly, so every item is not present on screen the whole time. Because it clutters it up. And that would an opportunity to, create something worthwhile, if you made an interesting or creative way of organising the bits and pieces.

To make the scene the main focus of the movie, which, if I am getting the idea here is… the idea. This means to make it big, or central, or… something. And like another reviewer said make the sprites animated.

Because right now i'm guessing this was more fun for you to make than it is for me to look at.

[--: mr cash :--]

.

you dont need to keep resubmitting this...

we get the idea.

it's an okay game.

[Bush Blaster]

my

Main problem with this isn't the content, but at the same time it is. Basically I don’t give a shit that we have to shoot bush, but it's just boring after about 2 seconds. And there is no incentive to keep shooting him.

Where as, with a bit of extra work you could make an actual game, with original artwork and an original story. I would find that much more interesting than this 1 dimensional interactive propaganda.

fungus-shark408 responds:

Some might call it.... addictive?